A horror story

wwwrunner · 08-25-2006, 07:36 AM

A road… in the middle of nowhere… in the middle of the night… a very heavy rain and a strong wind.
A man is walking, hoping to be picked up by some car… But no car is running on that empty road…
The darkness is deeper and deeper… The wind is stronger and stronger… The rain is heavier and heavier…
Suddenly, from nowhere, a car is stopping near him. The guy, without thinking, enters the car.
Inside… NOBODY !!!
And the car starts to run slowly… The guy doesn’t dare even to move a finger… And the car is running slowly… And running… into the dark…
After a while … the road turns to the right… The guy starts praying for his life… And the miracle happens… A hand appears through the car’s window and turns the steering wheel…
The guy, petrified by horror, sees than at every turn, the hand appears through the car’s window and turn the steering wheel…
After a while a city is approaching … The guy encourages himself, step out from the car and star to run toward that city…
He enters into the first bar (wet and frozen, with his hearth beating like !!!! ), asks for two huge vodkas and start to tell his horrifying story.
Everybody in the bar listen concerned …
After a half an hour, when all inside the bar are totally silences… two men entered… they are wet and tired.
-Look… This is the guy who entered our car while we pushed it !!!

ash · 08-25-2006, 08:57 AM

That's awesome!!!

troy2000 · 08-25-2006, 11:34 AM

I like that one.

Oxford · 08-25-2006, 09:27 PM

Very intriguing and suspenseful post. It kept me hooked till the final line. Excellent post.

wwwrunner · 09-08-2006, 09:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Oxford

It kept me hooked till the final line.

Now I can go fishing. I have all the bait I need

(For all the lines

)

08-25-2006, 07:36 AM	#1
wwwrunner Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: ROad to inferno... (maybe) Posts: 107	A horror story A road… in the middle of nowhere… in the middle of the night… a very heavy rain and a strong wind. A man is walking, hoping to be picked up by some car… But no car is running on that empty road… The darkness is deeper and deeper… The wind is stronger and stronger… The rain is heavier and heavier… Suddenly, from nowhere, a car is stopping near him. The guy, without thinking, enters the car. Inside… NOBODY !!! And the car starts to run slowly… The guy doesn’t dare even to move a finger… And the car is running slowly… And running… into the dark… After a while … the road turns to the right… The guy starts praying for his life… And the miracle happens… A hand appears through the car’s window and turns the steering wheel… The guy, petrified by horror, sees than at every turn, the hand appears through the car’s window and turn the steering wheel… After a while a city is approaching … The guy encourages himself, step out from the car and star to run toward that city… He enters into the first bar (wet and frozen, with his hearth beating like !!!! ), asks for two huge vodkas and start to tell his horrifying story. Everybody in the bar listen concerned … After a half an hour, when all inside the bar are totally silences… two men entered… they are wet and tired. -Look… This is the guy who entered our car while we pushed it !!! __________________ Where you can go from the middle of nowhere ? Nowhere ? ... Everywhere? ... That depends on you.

08-25-2006, 11:34 AM	#3
troy2000 Resident Armed Liberal Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Southern California Posts: 9,929 Images: 9	I like that one. __________________ I won't insult your intelligence by suggesting you really believe what you just said. WF Buckley, Jr

08-25-2006, 09:27 PM	#4
Oxford Super Moderator Join Date: Mar 2002 Location: Gladstone, Missouri Posts: 13,073 Blog Entries: 4	Very intriguing and suspenseful post. It kept me hooked till the final line. Excellent post. __________________ "If it's worth doing, it's worth doing right".

08-25-2006, 08:57 AM	#2
ash Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: En route Posts: 934 Images: 3	That's awesome!!!